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< class="additional-details">Additional Details 4 days ago (13 y/o) and I really need your honest opionions, like the first one ! It is really hard to read! However, being that you are only 13, i say stick with writing if that's what you love to do. Anyone who has that much dedication to finish something like you did, at your age, should certainly stick to it.
There is A LOTof work to be done with the story though. I tried really hard to read through it, but found myself skipping around from sentence to sentence....tryng to avoid all of the mistakes, and choppy-ness.
good luck, and keep on working...