Inspired by the man flying all across the globe just to meet me, I wrote this poem. What do you think? I never promise you,
I’d give myself to you.
I never promise you,
I’ll lose my senses
When I lay my eyes on you.
I never promise you,
The world will tumble,
My heart will tremble,
When i’m physically
beside you.
I never promise you,
What a man wants
From a woman.

Yet your generous red wings,
Are loving enough,
Are charming enough,
To fly all the way for me,
Just to see me,
Just for a hug,
Just for some
Eternal moments,
Just me and you.

Additional Details 4 days ago Greeneyeddevil...You are really a devil, don't you? Giving nothing but bad comments, not only on my poems but also on other people's poems, saying that it's poor and pathetic. You even condemned TD Euwaite's poem, one of the great poets here. I bet you don't really appreciate poetry and you've got no idea what LOVE is about. For that you are blocked. This is the end of you trolling around my ***. 4 days ago Can't literate, highly educated people write silly, ill-structured sappy love poems sometimes? Does it makes us less educated once we write silly things? Gosh you guys have got no idea how much i've studied literature. This poem is about the feelings and the dedication. I am not in my Literature class right now. Had enough of those for 5years. I just post stuffs on Y!A to have fun and to express my feelings. Never underestimate people just because they appear a bit silly in writing or whatever. Cant i write something silly while writing my Master's thesis? Have some compassion people. Arghhhhhhh! not again. Helmets on barf bags at the ready.