What do you think of the stanzas below? (3 stanzas, 12 lines)?

2008-02-16 09:31:14  

What do you think of the stanzas below? (3 stanzas, 12 lines)? The men of past on iron struck
as they rightly shaped and wrought
forts they built with carven rock
for fame and glory they all fought

the king's sword was rightly made
a lordly and a knightly blade
foes it will find, it's wrath un-kind
thus it's name will never fade

it slashed at mail, it pierced scale
it shone bright while foes went pale
it was fierce, it craved to pierce
once upon swords, it shattered them frail
Report Abuse by SPECTRE boss - J.M.
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It is what it is and it wasn't bad