What do you think of this poem?

2008-02-16 08:27:03  

What do you think of this poem? crazy little dreamer
how do you find the time
to think of oceans you will swim
and mountains you will climb
for once like you i set about
with diamonds in my eyes
all to be found was hollow ground
and unrelenting skies
my mind has turned to darker things
and i know i cant fly with these broken wings
so to you my little dreamer
how crazy and inspired
its hard to see the beauty
with eyes that have grown tired
Report Abuse by Jessica P
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February 26, 2008
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disillusioned, honest, relatble and real. I love the wondering yet sligfhtly condescending and fatherly tone you use when speakling to the "crazy little dreamer" i love the inventiveness and new ways you experssed things:
"diamonds in my eyes"
"its hard to see the beauty
with eyes that have grwn tired"
brilliant and ver poetical i. e. punchy, brief, honest, playful.