Does anyone else feel that Stephanie Meyer needs to get a new editor?

2008-02-19 06:29:31  

Does anyone else feel that Stephanie Meyer needs to get a new editor? My job is to read and review books for the library and recently I was given the task of reading the twilight series and Host by Stephanie Meyer. I felt that both were terribly over written. They were absurdly long and they took 200 pages for something that could be explained in ten. Now understand I have nothing wrong with long books. I read The Mist of Avalon in two days with out any trouble. So my question is where on earth is Stephanie Meyer’s editor and why aren’t they doing their job?

some things could have been cut down like the mentioning of Edward's beauty. References to Edward's Beauty: 165

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